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The Kissing Tree

Author: peepeye
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Words: 94
Class/Type: Cheesy Joke /Comedy
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The Kissing Tree

Here we are alone,
Beneath the kissing tree;
I'm gonna kiss you,
You're gonna kiss me!

I've been waiting for this day,
To kiss you all so much;
Together we close our eyes,
While our lips gently touch!

You start to shake and shiver,
Like a maniac having a fit;
By now it turns to screaming,
Not sure if you'll ever quit!

I know my kiss is fatal,
Equal to a heart attack;
Right in the midst of that searing kiss,
A caterpillar crawled down your back!

Submitted on 2011-07-01 23:22:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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