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    dots Submission Name: Welcome??dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWelcome??dots
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    I am losing the battle I felt I was winning
    Losing my grip to what reality and fantasy is
    Each day I let go more and more
    Of things that once were so close to me
    I give my life up to help others
    I do my best
    To be dependable
    To be reliable
    Only in the end.. I am taken advantage of for these qualities
    Trampled upon!
    Stomped down
    I never realized my forehead had the sign of a welcome mat!?

    Now I realize!
    Everyone is out to get me
    Out to take advantage of me and these great qualities I once took pride in!
    Now I have lost my sense of direction! I have lost my sense of importance
    For all I am now
    Is your welcome mat!

    Simply another rug to trample on!!!




    Submitted on 2011-07-02 11:01:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Happy Day Jackz!

    I can relate to this piece and I can ENCOURAGE YOU 2 BE ~*~ BE WHAT YOU ARE WITHOUT REGARD TO HOW OTHERS RESPOND ~*~

    YOU ARE DIVINE ~*~ YOU ARE A LIGHTWORKER ~*~ YOU ARE IT ~*~

    Forgive, LET BE & BE IT with Love, Peace, Joy, Abundance, Beauty & Prosperous Healthy Smiles to Share ;-) ;-) ;-)
    | Posted on 2011-07-02 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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