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    dots Submission Name: Spotted Fawndots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 609
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    Description:
       Happy day & 4th holiday for us in the USA ~*~

    My pup Bailey has a deer who comes to visit and they sit gazing and animal telepathic talking. There are several occasions they touch, through the fence, nose to nose!

    She brought here 2 new spotted fawns (breeding seasons are off for several years with weather and it seems they breed year round!)

    We are NATURE in Love, Peace, Joy, Abundance, Beauty & Prosperous Healthy Smiles to Share ;-) ;-) ;-)


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    dotsSpotted Fawndots
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    Beneath the eclipse of dawn
    Birth of Twin Spotted Fawn

    Heat of the season
    Born for a reason

    Circled Natural Vision
    All Nature Risen

    Keepers of the Wood
    Living Divine in my Hood ~*~





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      Reminds me of Bambi........what a nice read this was.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2011-12-02 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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