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    Author: rawpot
    ASL Info:    24/M/India
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 383/256/84
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Serious
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       just wrote a few quotes...


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    Dont be a Screw up, screw thing up!

    Rise high, look down, be scared.... if you fall, it will hurt...

    Stop not where others stop, start not where everyone starts, start & stop all by yourself...





    Submitted on 2004-07-29 22:49:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "Rise high, look down, be scared... if you fall, it will hurt..."
    haha, good one.
    like MisterFizzle said, not exactly profound, but amusing...
    | Posted on 2004-07-30 00:00:00 | by Kalidoscopeeyes | [ Reply to This ]
      Not exactly profound words of wisdom, this is probably the kind of advice I'd get from my dog if he could talk. it's like Oh tell me great leader what should I live by?

    Eat right, live long life!

    BRILLIANT BRILLIANT GENIUS!
    | Posted on 2004-07-29 00:00:00 | by Mister Fizzle | [ Reply to This ]
      the last one is on point. The First one should have 'things'. In the middle one if you look down you'll prolly fall. I can't remeber what sport it was in reference to, but somebody once told me that the body follows the eyes...
    shard
    | Posted on 2004-07-29 00:00:00 | by particularshard | [ Reply to This ]
      those were cool... im gonna bookmark this page, cuz right now, im so tired, that i dont hink i can remember even one...
    | Posted on 2004-07-29 00:00:00 | by WD20x2 | [ Reply to This ]


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