Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Some Quotesdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: rawpot
    ASL Info:    24/M/India
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 383/256/84
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Serious
    Total Views: 675
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 244



    Description:
       just wrote a few quotes...


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSome Quotesdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Dont be a Screw up, screw thing up!

    Rise high, look down, be scared.... if you fall, it will hurt...

    Stop not where others stop, start not where everyone starts, start & stop all by yourself...





    Submitted on 2004-07-29 22:49:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      "Rise high, look down, be scared... if you fall, it will hurt..."
    haha, good one.
    like MisterFizzle said, not exactly profound, but amusing...
    | Posted on 2004-07-30 00:00:00 | by Kalidoscopeeyes | [ Reply to This ]
      Not exactly profound words of wisdom, this is probably the kind of advice I'd get from my dog if he could talk. it's like Oh tell me great leader what should I live by?

    Eat right, live long life!

    BRILLIANT BRILLIANT GENIUS!
    | Posted on 2004-07-29 00:00:00 | by Mister Fizzle | [ Reply to This ]
      the last one is on point. The First one should have 'things'. In the middle one if you look down you'll prolly fall. I can't remeber what sport it was in reference to, but somebody once told me that the body follows the eyes...
    shard
    | Posted on 2004-07-29 00:00:00 | by particularshard | [ Reply to This ]
      those were cool... im gonna bookmark this page, cuz right now, im so tired, that i dont hink i can remember even one...
    | Posted on 2004-07-29 00:00:00 | by WD20x2 | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    19157

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Singed and Shaken written by Passionbyapathy
    rubric system/ just punch it in (let the machine) written by pioneerheart
    Monarch Butterflies written by poetotoe
    Razors, punches, and " 'night honey bunc written by TheAirWeBreathe
    Flavourless written by kase
    A Hand to Hold written by Windigo
    sad blue opening lines written by wav
    Fateful Life written by poet09
    Gold written by MyPeriodical
    The Rose of Roses written by poetotoe
    that one bar written by etheror
    Air Born Dreams written by poetotoe
    musings on death written by gwenn sundala
    The Game written by poetotoe
    Sour written by Passionbyapathy
    The Demon in my Bed written by ThtDizzyDreamer
    Born Last written by Narna
    Paying the price. written by Narna
    Freelance Grafiker Ankara - Özel Ders Ankara written by bbkagp
    an old modern day proverb written by gwenn sundala
    Friar Tuck written by Blue Monk
    The first five minutes written by Narna
    fresh graves written by etheror
    Forever In My Soul written by Rainin_Raspbery
    musings of an autumn day written by gwenn sundala
    Did I lay in the regolith written by AsiaticFox
    Destroyed from Within written by poet09
    Morning Musings of a Woman With Abandonment Issues written by Carosuel
    Systems written by Daniel Barlow
    Pillars and Pillows written by Rainin_Raspbery

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry