I am watching a volcano erupting and I cannot move my gaze away from it. There was a strong fire ignited at the very beginning, not a flame, but a fire. And as I kept reading, that passion transformed into tranquility. Still strong, only a change from one state to the other.
It's like a person gets angry at something and they have that urge to rip the whole world apart. But then, something happens, control, I suppose, and that anger changes into understanding, and understanding changes into peace.
There is strength in this. From the beginning to the very end.
The only thing that was distracting to me was the capital letters on almost every word. I think your message will still remain strong.
Like the frantic moth become, and yet this moth found satisfaction and peace. There is a point at which mercy is granted. Whether it is a permanent peace or yet another cycle of flying ever higher is always the question. Leave me behind? I think not! To become the avatar... the ultimate service of servers! To rest in eternity? I think not! And trouble not.
nice message...even in chaos we can find peace within ourselves...although the devil is just a stone's throw away, waiting for us to fall again into turmoil and indecision...
the whole storm idea works well...lightning lurking...sort of like today where i live...started out sunny---a feeling of complaceny and peace...distracted soon by storms...but if there is peace inside, whatever happens outside is no matter.
did you mean "Vanished like a Star"
a nice read....i would like to see you play a bit with the last line....maybe come up with some alternative wording for the same idea. maybe a reference back to the Volcano in some way.