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    dots Submission Name: Octopusdots
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    Author: writeous
    Elite Ratio:    1.49 - 0/2/18
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsOctopusdots
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      Sometimes
    when playing

    " the LOVER "

    I feel like an octopuss.

    reaching out

    and then pulling in....


    with tremendous
    force.




    Submitted on 2011-07-07 10:11:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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