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    dots Submission Name: Beauty and Gracedots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsBeauty and Gracedots
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    the sky bent down to touch the earth
    and the ocean wrapped her arms around the wind
    there was dancing in the trees and the music from the birds

    enlightened
    and like a subtle whisper
    edified

    thrown back
    stunned
    the breath taken out of me
    I watched
    in awe
    at the beauty of the the world

    laws that govern
    and grace that unveils
    beauty without end
    complete
    and divine and satisfied
    these are the beautiful things that are hearts aspire to

    the we are continually climbing up the vines
    and traveling down paths

    straight and narrow
    and few are those who find it
    but I find
    no matter where I turn
    it is nothing but a turn back
    to the beauty of heart




    Submitted on 2011-07-07 12:15:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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