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    dots Submission Name: leather Vowdots
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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 381
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 402



    Description:
       Decided to stop taking drugs with a friend, braided 2 leather bracelets to wear as a reminder of the promise made.


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    Braided a leather vow,
    built a solemn pact.
    We are masters now,
    there's no looking back.

    Brown and twisted
    were our days, wasted.
    But time has shifted
    to change our faces.

    A circle, now perfect.
    A reminding embrace..
    We are highly gifted
    to be touched by grace...




    Submitted on 2011-07-10 15:51:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Congrads on your decicion. And that leather vow, that's a good way of keeping your promise.

    I used to wear a silver ring with a star on it. My ex gave it to me, and I promised I'd wear it remind myself of my love for him. It lasted 6 years though he always used to tell me what to do and not do.

    Now I wear a silver ring with three twisted lines. It's my reminder never to let any guy tell me what to do and not do. I bought it myself too. Since then, I never let a guy tell me what to do.

    Things have no meaning until you tell yourself what it symbolizes so that when you look at it, you know what you need to do.

    Nice simple meaningful poem.

    Cheers,

    Irina

    | Posted on 2011-07-11 00:00:00 | by charmedidentity | [ Reply to This ]
      i especially think the second stanza is so well worded.

    damn it is nice to have the site working again...so missed reading and commenting...gets the juices flowing again.
    | Posted on 2011-07-10 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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