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    dots Submission Name: Poems from a sleep deprived teen 5/09/10 CMPdots
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    Author: Soniathedrummer
    ASL Info:    17 Female, MI
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 0/2/32
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsPoems from a sleep deprived teen 5/09/10 CMPdots
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    Worn are the days,
    Hours and years,
    Watch as the sun dries up my salted tears,
    Hope for light to make things right,
    Out of the darkness of humanity we march,
    As all our love flutters from our beaten hearts,
    Do not besmerch the trail your soul chose,
    Follow it and be true,
    If so,
    At the end there will be a black rose,
    Pluck it and smell the putrid scent of decay,
    Thats nawing at our brains,
    Constantly day and night,
    Watch as we die,
    Just a little bit more every time dawn breaks,
    So save your breath,
    Because its the last you'll ever take.
    {Truly&formally au revoir to jealousy.} ~Eternal confusion to you and best of your worst nightmares, The Devil With A DuckTaped Heart




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    ||| Comments |||
      it seems there may be some good stuff here by you...but the rules of posting are that no more than two posts perday can be posted. Putting up so many knocks everyone else off the board and is not representative of sharing...

    no one else gets a chance to get their words seen and heard--

    thank you for considering that....

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-07-14 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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