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    dots Submission Name: Forever fallingdots

    Author: Soniathedrummer
    ASL Info:    17 Female, MI
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 0/2/32
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 363
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       For the one I love

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    dotsForever fallingdots

    To see you,
    Breathe you in,
    Sudden love and unappreciated at that.
    Know that its true.
    I will always feel for you.
    Wish you were mine forever and all of time.
    This cannot be so,
    For your heart sways to and fro,
    In my mind I scream I must let you go,
    Never will my heart release my mind to let you know,
    I've moved on but havent at the same time,
    You will always secretly have me,
    And in my heart part of you is always going to be mine.

    Submitted on 2011-07-17 04:30:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is excellent! It covers a difficult subject, and you have done it well.

    I am a senior and certain love affairs with people that have long since moved on still remain etched in my mind and heart....as fresh and fragrant as yesterday's Rose...

    Nice work!
    | Posted on 2011-07-17 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      sometimes we never let ex-lovers go...our mind says to release, but the heart clings.

    | Posted on 2011-07-17 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
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