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    dots Submission Name: My Eternity - God's great passiondots

    Author: Joachim
    ASL Info:    75 Male RSA
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    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Longing
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    dotsMy Eternity - God's great passiondots

    ..............When you remember the play that lifted your heart as a child, you will know the heart of God. You will understand the motives behind this universal expression. God's creations and the interwoven fabric of space and time, which holds them suspended in vibrator dance, may be fraught with what appears to present day human consciousness as dazzling complexity.
    Why do dolphins leap joyful from the sea? Why do the morning birds sing? Why does the earth dance in trees and reach forests to the sun? Why do children play?
    The purpose of these realms is enjoyment. This is a recreational intended universe, designed to multiply the life forms that share God's great passion: beauty - its creation and appreciation, its development in structure, in symphonies of light, sound, time, and dimension.........................
    Joachim 1979 - 1999

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      but not too many appreciate it...we are all too busy running around in a world of doing...not stopping to take it all in...understanding the beauty life has to offer...

    it's like there is a garden of eden right next door...but we won't cross yards to find it...we stay on our own porch and stare at the congestion we have made of life.

    | Posted on 2011-07-17 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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