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    dots Submission Name: Where are you going?dots
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    Author: MrBear
    ASL Info:    19/M/Ga
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 59/109/48
    Words: 16
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 504
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    dotsWhere are you going?dots
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    Yesterday doesn't matter,
    Tomorrow too far away,
    Reminiscing or Fantasizing?
    All that matters is Today.




    Submitted on 2011-07-19 08:54:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I dunno, this feels a bit short. Maybe you should expand it a bit or cut the 3rd line and make it even shorter. That would make it better I think...
    | Posted on 2011-07-19 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      yes, we keep looking back so much, and looking forward even more...when we should concentrate on the "now."

    we need to live in the moment...people don't do that enough...

    a short piece that expresses a real truth.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-07-19 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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