Description: I'm not a stalker. This is just me coping with losing one of my best friends to the world highschool (boys, looks, blah blah blah).
Just Another Shadow -------------------------------------------
Now are you happy?
Happy with your life?
That I watch your every move
And I wonder
What are your intentions?
That your smile pinches my heart
And makes me want to cry out in pain?
That I'm in love with your life
And it's killing me that I'm not a part of it?
Just a one person audience,
Sitting in the dimly lit room,
Watching the reel turn.
What's to become of a shadow
Not sewn on?
i like your poem 'cause i'm in that situation now i can relate from it...the flow is ok...the last two lines are great and for me it's so impressive...in the second line i think u can remove the word 'that"...like it.. good job! meh, jen
Submission Name: Just Another Shadow
