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    dots Submission Name: Late Nightsdots
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    Author: darkfeathers
    ASL Info:    19/female/beddybyeland
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 4/2/10
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
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       sometimes i write and i think i have talent, but then i see the truth and they're just words i feel related to


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    dotsLate Nightsdots
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    Late nights spent doing nothing
    nothing with life
    nothing with friends
    nothing with yourself

    late nights spent typing
    meaningless words no one reads

    wondering
    waiting
    listening
    fading

    when you leave will his anger turn to someone else
    when you're saved relief like wind moving through your chest, anger that you needed saving

    when

    nothing will ever be the same




    Submitted on 2011-07-22 00:34:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It's not talent to write words that you can relate to, but it's not talent to write words that other people can relate to aswell.

    What is talent, and talent is such a weird word, is being able to capture emotions and thought, rather than events. Which I think you do, and can do.

    And if you want people to your poems, capturing emotions makes it easier. Not everyone knows the pain of one certain event, but everyone knows pain.

    Best of luck, and never stop writing.
    | Posted on 2011-07-22 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah I have found myself late night writing on this site time after time and I habe gotten to the point same as you, am I writing by myself, or is there someone, some kind of soul out there reading and relating to what I am going through, half the time or nearly 80 percent of the time you get nothing, no one around you and your silent enigma of loneliness just to see if well you are alright, then it becomes a trend staying up all night when every one but you is asleep and you are just pouring your heart out. Hoping for another day to get through and past the vicious cycle. Waiting, trying, hoping, and in your words fading. Well I thought I would come in on your late night and tell you that Im listening, reading, and writing, to keep yourself from fading. Please keep writing hope to hear from you soon.
    | Posted on 2011-07-22 00:00:00 | by Crestfallenman | [ Reply to This ]


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