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    Author: afra
    ASL Info:    15/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.33 - 4/9/19
    Words: 224
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    i have lived in these cold nights ,
    > i hav chased a bright light ,
    >
    > i have survived in rain ,
    > i have laughted in pain ,
    >
    > i have cried when u say 'good bye' ,
    > i have also seen tears in your eye ,
    >
    > i have been through all type of situation,
    > i have tried to question my destenation ,
    >
    > i have tried to hide my tears ,
    > i have tried to fight my fears,
    >
    > i have lived without a home ,
    > i have smiled when i was alone,
    >
    > i have waited eventough i know u were not going to come,
    > my eyes bleed tears even tought they are some,
    >
    > i have been in pain eventough i was not hurt ,
    > i have said "sorry" eventough it wasnt worth,
    >
    > i have realized eventough its late ,
    > i have loved the ting which i used to hate,
    >
    > i have feelings even tough they arent worth ,
    > i have a heart even tough its already hurt,
    >
    > i may not drown in my own tears ,
    > but i may die in my fears ,




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