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    dots Submission Name: maths test dots
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    Author: afra
    ASL Info:    15/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.33 - 4/9/19
    Words: 187
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    dotsmaths test dots
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    > life's boat was smootly sailing ,
    > but here comes the thunder strom of failing ,
    >
    > heart beat faster inside my chest ,
    > whenever there is a maths test ,
    >
    > some think is a piece of cake ,
    > but i think its a head ake,
    >
    > taking square root ,
    > but didnt found my perfect route ,
    >
    > multplying so many powers ,
    > i am checking my will power,
    >
    > why is maths so hard ,
    > it should be easy as playing UNO cards ,
    >
    > why was maths created ,
    > mom says it makes me educated ,
    >
    > i hate my self when i am stuck in such equation ,
    > i become grumpy and i hate that situatiuon ,
    >
    > hate it or love it have to give it any way ,
    > and hope that i will get an A some day,
    >
    > dont want to get fail ,
    > my life boat should easliy sail,




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      thanks every one and its true i m really poor at my spelling ...:(
    | Posted on 2011-07-23 00:00:00 | by afra | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm guessing newbie?
    it's good. I'm not used to this style but loving it.
    I agree, work on your spelling, but luckily poetry isn't about grammar. It's about what's inside and how you express it. Keep writing. Maybe you can convert me.
    -RACHEL-
    | Posted on 2011-07-22 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]
      possiblities...but work on spelling and smoothing this out in spots...could be a smile!

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-07-22 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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