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    Author: afra
    ASL Info:    15/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.33 - 4/9/19
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
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    8f is a place of unity
    8f is our identity
    8f my not be majority
    8f also have capability
    8f have friends audibility

    sometimes we fight
    but we again make things alright
    8f is a place where we come 2 make our future bright
    but of 8f we r the light
    8f is a place where we always feel alright

    when on me there is a shower of pain
    when in my heart it rains
    8f is a place where i m happy again
    8f is bond together like a chain
    with souls clear n simple pure n plain




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