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    dots Submission Name: Star !!!dots
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    Author: afra
    ASL Info:    15/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.33 - 4/9/19
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsStar !!!dots
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    close your eyes and open your heart ,
    accept all the challenges they are life's part ,

    try to be a star ,
    by being who you are ,

    you can do every thing ,you just have to believe it ,
    you have the power, just have to feel it ,

    make your life your own story ,
    your imagination is a big glory ,

    live your life your own way ,
    life won't last forever, time doesn't stay ,

    you are a star you must shine ,
    you can shine on your own way ,its fine ,

    you are the writer of your own destiny ,
    your are real you have your own dignity ,

    you can shine ,you just have to believe it ,
    sadness and sorrows you have to leave it ,




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