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    dots Submission Name: Cryingdots
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    Author: Soniathedrummer
    ASL Info:    17 Female, MI
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 0/2/32
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 361
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 532



    Description:
       The pain


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    dotsCryingdots
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    Its killing me inside,
    Do you know the fucking nights that I've cried??? Missing you and being alone,
    No one near me to call my own.
    No it doesnt matter to you,
    Its all not true,
    You couldnt be as selfish as they say,
    Please make the pain just go away,
    I want to believe in a world of peace,
    Where harmony joins and they meet,
    But thats not going to happen,
    Cause you're going away to be happy,,,
    And I'm going to be happy for you!




    Submitted on 2011-07-23 01:45:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I enjoyed reading this poem, it has a great flow to it, and I can actually feel the emotions. I can relate too. Nicely penned! :)
    | Posted on 2011-07-24 00:00:00 | by AltheaLaochra | [ Reply to This ]

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