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    dots Submission Name: Wishingdots
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    Author: Soniathedrummer
    ASL Info:    17 Female, MI
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 0/2/32
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Wishing for tomorrow on a star thats way too dim, Praying to a God that doesnt exist,
    Loving life and hating it all the same,
    Why do we participate in this silly love game!
    Tell me the answer,
    I'll tell you a tale,
    Of how life on earth decays and whines,
    Back then,
    Was a simpler time..




    Submitted on 2011-07-23 02:05:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Was a very simple time my dear ah how thr grass was greener a time slip ago. I read your many poems of the late night, I too pray, and agnostic as I say, I have the same doubts we are all here, alone. You fill this site every night with very longing poems. Over a past lover perhaps, a broken heart can do so, I find myself thinking of the times of my past loves as well. And what really sucks is when everyone is asleep here are people like us upon the crack of night yearning for something better in return. We cramp by the computers and write these trials of tears, let our minds flood with images of memorial photographs and race with things that soothed us in our past that our non existent in our present, and very daunting to our future. I just wanted to tell you again, that you are not alone in this, and if you wanted, I would enjoy that company in this lonesome trap too. Beautiful write and don't stop writing hope to hear from you soon.
    | Posted on 2011-07-23 00:00:00 | by Crestfallenman | [ Reply to This ]

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