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    Author: afra
    ASL Info:    15/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.33 - 4/9/19
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    life become a dark night ,
    in which nothing seems alright ,

    that time comes only once in a year ,
    in which every eye is filled with tear ,

    parents make us leave face book behind ,
    at that time life isn't kind ,

    all the books come with no limit line ,
    get ready kids its exams time ,

    studying books all day make my eyes scream ,
    my books don't even leave me in my dream ,

    hate it or love it have to give it any way ,
    when its exam time ,time just stays ,

    studying books all day makes my brain fry ,
    to concentrate on my books i try ,




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      Well the beauty of this poem is that it can be interpreted in many ways. You can take it for what it is. which to me is an angry teenager who is mad at thier parents and frustrated with school. You can also interpret it as a person who is fed up with life and the way it is going. Do not give up on your writting and understand that life always gets worse before it gets better.
    | Posted on 2011-07-25 00:00:00 | by DeathTone | [ Reply to This ]


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