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    dots Submission Name: till i crydots
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    Author: afra
    ASL Info:    15/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.33 - 4/9/19
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotstill i crydots
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    now you are gone ,
    i am all alone ,

    you loved me really fast ,
    but our love didn't last ,

    i taught we can be together i was wrong ,
    now i can not help my self to stay strong ,

    now when i close my eyes i see dark ,
    no sign of love not even a mark ,

    from the first tear till i cry ,
    to bring u back i try ,

    in my own tears i have be drown ,
    like an unopened gift i have been thrown,

    without you i try to settle down ,
    but i end up falling on the ground ,




    Submitted on 2011-07-23 08:57:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    | Posted on 2011-07-26 00:00:00 | by afra | [ Reply to This ]
      This is kinda the last thing I was hoping to stumble across but, I guess I'm glad I did. Right now, I am barely in a relationship. She told me before we ever began that she's never broken up with a guy, that she just distances herself until they do it. Because of drugs, I fucked things up with the girl of my dreams. It was about two months ago and I've been aware of the distance between us growing since. Yes, I'll try to salvage it but, I truly believe the only reason we're still together is because I'm out of town and I don't know how well I'd handle myself if I don't get one last kiss before letting her go. The reason I said I guess I'm glad I read this is just to make sure you know that you're not alone in the way you feel. And, things WILL get better whenever you're ready for them to. At the very least, your sorrow has inspired a lovely artwork.
    | Posted on 2011-07-25 00:00:00 | by MyWorld | [ Reply to This ]


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