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    dots Submission Name: Out of My ASHdots
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    Author: darkfeathers
    ASL Info:    19/female/beddybyeland
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 4/2/10
    Words: 209
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Venting
    Total Views: 473
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       I don't know why anyone would want to read this, but go ahead if you must.


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    dotsOut of My ASHdots
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    I love to play with words.

    Out of the AIR, I draw words, powers, feelings, oxygen, and other elements. Whatever I pull from my life- falls and fails more quickly than anything I know. Maybe I'm just a poor example of what life is. Maybe I'm a whiner, a brat, a bitch. All the things people have told me I am. *the thinking kind of silence*

    If I'm all the things people have told me I am, I am also powerful, loveable, wonderful, smart, beautiful, talented. I should be a frickin' rockstar. But even though I'm not (a rockstar that is), that doesn't mean I'm not all the things I've been told. All these words and more.

    I don't know if I'm pissed, or if I'm trying to remain pissed. I don't know if I'm trying to cheer myself up. I do know I pulled all of this out my ass and hence the title.

    But maybe the title is double edged. I meant to pull an "angsty" poem or story out of my butt so that I could have proof this day happened. Instead, writing off the top of my head has made this proof that I'm still here even though this day happened.




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      Well... I tend to think I'm not everything that people say I am. That's because I don't value their opinion that much. A mob in general is a stupid animal. :) Opinions, the more people stand against them, sometimes tend to lose their meaning rather than become more powerful...
    | Posted on 2011-07-24 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      Just one of those days? Yeah, those days suck, but they make for good writes.

    Some words I'm sure you've already heard and know: People can put words on who you are or what makes up you, but when the end of the day comes, only you can say who you really are. And as long as you're happy with who you are, you're a success.

    I can't really critique random thoughts, but I can say I like them and I understand where they're coming from.

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    | Posted on 2011-07-24 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]


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