It is so wonderful how I enjoy your work, topics reversed from what I normally write. I like that.
The faith of flesh
And your caress
Like a bitten neck
I bleed at your beck
I like how faith of flesh creates a parallel almost, and how faith and flesh are two contradictions standing on their own. Well at least in the sense that I review the two. If you go by the ol faith is the substance of things hoped for and the evidence of things not seen, and apply that to flesh it actually creates something really interesting.
This was written very well. flowed nicely and the imagery was good. It was dark, mysterious and sexy. Though I love rhyme it seemed to have confined this piece. It feels like there would have been more room to breathe with free verse, but thats just me.
Altogether, this is a superb piece.
well that's a wonderful poem i like it because it seems to be almost like mixing sex with the theme of the whole poem. you know honestly i think it is very sexually oriented and if its not then i guess that is how i relate to it cause i see big giant letters reading s SEX going across in fact i like this poem a lot!!!!! I am adding it to my favs.