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    dots Submission Name: Minimadots
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    Author: Paradox
    ASL Info:    33/m/Earthbound
    Elite Ratio:    4.58 - 1055/434/90
    Words: 24
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 566
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    dotsMinimadots
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    White
    Fury
    Flickers

    Light
    Ends
    Here

    White
    Fury
    Flickers

    Life
    Starts
    Here

    White
    Fury
    Flickers




    Submitted on 2011-07-24 09:27:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like this and i get this. so. i think you are on to something. i won't say why or why.

    no. i don't do graffiti.



    | Posted on 2012-10-03 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]
      I read this like this

    White
    Light

    Fury
    Ends

    Flickers
    Here

    :)

    I did enjoy this. Light is something that I find a lot of meaning in. Flickering and furious light can mean a lot. Can "project" a lot to use jocobs idea. And I can definately see what he means by that.

    Thank you for sharing.
    | Posted on 2011-07-25 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      Very interesting piece. You really have to slowly pronunciate the words, which creates a meaningful pause that allows time fr each word to sink in.

    It reminds me of an old black and white horror movie where the lightening lightens a room, then all is dark, and something changes.
    | Posted on 2011-07-24 00:00:00 | by Agent V. | [ Reply to This ]
      i get a projection of a black and white movie of life...the white on the screen the blank spots...the lost spots...the inbetween...the beginning, the end, the spliced reel in the middle...after light is life...if we can keep the movie moving forward---

    and the sound comes from a poet's words. but are the characters really saying the lines or are they lip synching...?

    what is real and what is reel?


    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-07-24 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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