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    dots Submission Name: Ever Sincedots
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    Author: darkfeathers
    ASL Info:    19/female/beddybyeland
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 4/2/10
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Story/Longing
    Total Views: 695
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    Bytes: 850



    Description:
       A weird continuation of It Began With a Dream. I'm elaborating on my thoughts since.


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    dotsEver Sincedots
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    Ever since my dream, I've been left with a longing. A longing for a love that can conquer nations. A longing for someone who loves me as fiercely as I love him. How can you love someone you've never met? I wonder if he dreamt about me? Is there a possibility that destiny is reaching across the impossibility? This perfect stranger, My Prince, is kind, sweet, handsome, and strong. He laughs at my jokes and warms me with his smile. This connection that was formed in a dream is now what I sleep for. I sleep to see him again. And when I wake up, whether I remember my dreams or not, I believe we've met again. We've gone on wild adventures and been in high risk situations. We've loved each other even though we shouldn't and we've chosen each other over more "important" things, including our own lives.




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      I use to have similar dreams about a girl, who left my life way too soon. So soon that I never had the opportunity to really know her.
    I basically know exactly how you feel.
    It sounds weird when you try to explain it to people, they say "how can you love someone whom you've never met?"
    Essentially you love this self-manifested entity so much because you gave him all of his charecteristics.
    He is flawless in your mind, and these obsessions can lead to dark places.

    I don't mean to advertise; but my poem that I wrote:

    "Silent marks across your name"

    Was written about this girl who I hardly spoke to at all. Then one day, she was gone. After that I've entertained the thought that she would have been the perfect girl. I spent years vicariously living with her in a fabrication of my regret.
    | Posted on 2011-07-24 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]


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