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    dots Submission Name: O my beloved.dots
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    Author: Joachim
    ASL Info:    75 Male RSA
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Well I think this man could Walk his Talk. This is from a Lover True and Honest as it should be.
    So much writ about Loves Won and Lost love these days. Passions gone wrong.
    This is sounds of silence advice.

    Joachim


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    dotsO my beloved.dots
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    O my beloved.

    How beautiful are thy feet with shoes, O prince's daughter! the joints of thy thighs are like jewels, the work of the hands of a cunning workman.
    Thy navel is like a round goblet, which wanteth not liquor: thy belly is like an heap of wheat set about with lilies.

    Thy two breasts are like two young roes that are twins.
    Thy neck is as a tower of ivory; thine eyes like the fishpools in Heshbon, by the gate of Bathrabbim: thy nose is as the tower of Lebanon which looketh toward Damascus.
    Thine head upon thee is like Carmel, and the hair of thine head like purple; the king is held in the galleries.

    How fair and how pleasant art thou, O love, for delights!
    This thy stature is like to a palm tree, and thy breasts to clusters of grapes.
    I said, I will go up to the palm tree, I will take hold of the boughs thereof: now also thy breasts shall be as clusters of the vine, and the smell of thy nose like apples;
    And the roof of thy mouth like the best wine for my beloved, that goeth down sweetly, causing the lips of those that are asleep to speak.

    I am my beloved's, and his desire is toward me.
    Come, my beloved, let us go forth into the field; let us lodge in the villages.
    Let us get up early to the vineyards; let us see if the vine flourish, whether the tender grape appear, and the pomegranates bud forth: there will I give thee my loves.
    The mandrakes give a smell, and at our gates are all manner of pleasant fruits, new and old, which I have laid up for thee, O my beloved.

    Solomon.





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       I love Song of Solomon. My church did a study on it once, it can take you to a beautiful place with Christ.
    This is one of favorite verses;

    8 Listen! My beloved!
    Look! Here he comes,
    leaping across the mountains,
    bounding over the hills.
    9 My beloved is like a gazelle or a young stag.
    Look! There he stands behind our wall,
    gazing through the windows,
    peering through the lattice.
    10 My beloved spoke and said to me,
    “Arise, my darling,
    my beautiful one, come with me.
    11 See! The winter is past;
    the rains are over and gone.
    12 Flowers appear on the earth;
    the season of singing has come,
    the cooing of doves
    is heard in our land.
    13 The fig tree forms its early fruit;
    the blossoming vines spread their fragrance.
    Arise, come, my darling;
    my beautiful one, come with me.”
    | Posted on 2011-07-26 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]
      lol i was just about to say if ever i read song of songs this would be it..

    my mind always boggled about the "your teeth are like freshly shawn sheep..." not as romantic as it sounds haha!

    anyways.
    | Posted on 2011-07-25 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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