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    Author: MyWorld
    ASL Info:    21/M/IN
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 76/99/87
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
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       This is a fresh piece. I hate the feelings that I inspired it.


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    There's blood in the streets

    There's enough for us each

    Find in my dissolution

    Something to keep

    Make it yours

    Once you're free

    Forget about it all

    Focus as you breathe

    Destroy every little shard

    That bears any semblance

    To the encumbrance of my heart

    There's nothing that you need

    In this desolate, daunting darkness

    A silver tongue in garbage incarnate




    Submitted on 2011-07-25 17:16:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      In this desolate, daunting darkness

    A silver tongue in garbage incarnate




    These are my fav lines!

    A wonderful read :)

    Althea~
    | Posted on 2011-07-25 00:00:00 | by AltheaLaochra | [ Reply to This ]


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