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    dots Submission Name: Better offdots
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    Author: Soniathedrummer
    ASL Info:    17 Female, MI
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 0/2/32
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
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    dotsBetter offdots
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    Better misunderstood than reading my mind,
    Better off when you cant look inside,
    If this was so,
    Your heart would be filled with woe........For I am a monster,
    A nightmare indeed,
    I fear for anyone that gets near me,
    For their heart shall be torn,
    Their judgement misplaced,
    All memories of happiness once there forever erased..........




    Submitted on 2011-07-25 19:05:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yes this was a wonderful read. I've recently felt the same. Its truly amazing how some people blame you for their mistakes and the insecurity for oneself doesn't make the situation any better. Which leads to blaming yourself also as a common question always surfaces: "I didn't ask to be born" "Why was I born, for what purpose" "Who am I" "I am the root the of everyones problem" and it seems that there is no hope, though its lingering but just out of sight, the eyes are just blinded by hurt, betrayal, and confusion that it just can't see it, and therefore wants to give up.

    Yes I can relate...

    I fear for anyone that gets near me,
    For their heart shall be torn,
    Their judgement misplaced,
    All memories of happiness once there forever erased..........


    Nicely penned!

    and am sorry for the rant...its just that this poem means a lot because of the stuff that has been happening to me recently~

    Althea~
    | Posted on 2011-07-25 00:00:00 | by AltheaLaochra | [ Reply to This ]

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