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    dots Submission Name: he is the one dots
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    Author: afra
    ASL Info:    15/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.33 - 4/9/19
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotshe is the one dots
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    you made me cry ,
    but he wiped my tears ,
    he saw my love for you in my eye ,
    but still he hugged me in my fears ,

    i was upset because of you ,
    but he said sorry ,
    i ran on road after you ,
    but he was ran after me and he was worry,

    i used to do make up for you ,
    but he said i looked beautiful ,
    my world used to be cold because of you ,
    but he melted the snow ,

    he loved me ,
    even tough i loved you ,
    he and i are meant to be ,
    that i want you to know,




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