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    Author: afra
    ASL Info:    15/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.33 - 4/9/19
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsred eyesdots
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    a broken heart ,
    has become my life's part ,

    sleepless nights , burning eyes ,
    same old stories , same old lies ,

    come and look in my eye then you will see the dazing pain ,
    where is the love ? who is the cloud of rain ,

    trying to hold on to your love rope ,
    with a little hope ,

    taking help ,
    or being all by my self ,

    won't make any change ,
    cause destiny is out of my range ,

    my red eyes bleeds million tears ,
    a broken heart which is in fears ,

    my brain is satisfied but can't give my heart satisfaction ,
    with a big hope i am running towards my destination,




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