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    dots Submission Name: Arrh! got it all wrongdots

    Author: Temidayo
    ASL Info:    29 male Nigeria-lagos
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 161/40/20
    Words: 232
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Guess I got it all wrong

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    dotsArrh! got it all wrongdots

    I got it all wrong,
    felt if I generously on a regular gave head,
    this woman would like the play and definately stay
    After all said and done,she did the opposite and left instead.

    I got it all wrong,
    to believe what I was told - if me loved her less in this relationship I would control best,
    consequently it died from a lack of what I withheld,for it required two to invest.

    I got it all wrong
    felt that if I feasted alone
    my heart would be forever glad
    but then I remembered sharing love
    it was the best I ever had.

    I got it all wrong
    when I thought my best mate and me
    would be great friends forever.
    We seldom worked at it
    thus we were soon disbanded
    by unfavourable weather.

    I got it all wrong
    when I felt that love
    was all that mattered for a woman to stay?
    Nay! Comfort and understanding
    ought to be factored in the fray.

    I got it all wrong
    when I thought the wicked
    are miserable and lonely.
    They¡¯re having a ball all the time
    never lacking company.

    I got it all wrong, I guess
    thinking you¡¯ll appreciate this first reading.
    If you don¡¯t, I reckon; at this point
    is what this piece as also all evil be needing.

    Submitted on 2011-07-29 01:09:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hi actually you got it all right.
    Regards Joachim
    | Posted on 2011-07-29 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]

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