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    dots Submission Name: Throne 7/30/11 CMPdots
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    Author: Soniathedrummer
    ASL Info:    17 Female, MI
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 0/2/32
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 341
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 453



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    dotsThrone 7/30/11 CMPdots
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    You say you love me,
    But the affections not there,
    Don't give me excuses,
    That are neither here nor there,
    Proof is what I need,
    Alas you have none,
    So I have doubts of your beliefs,
    Cut my heard deeply,
    Indeed this you did do,
    Without true love,
    I will remain broken,
    Cannot be alone,
    Must have a home,
    You seem unwilling to provide my heart such a throne.




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    | Posted on 2011-08-03 00:00:00 | by fanky | [ Reply to This ]
      Hm... you got something going here but this line kinda breaks the rhythm: "Heart t'was only shattered twice before you," You should definitely make it shorter.

    Keep on writing!
    | Posted on 2011-07-30 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]

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