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The Flicker Fusion Threshold

Author: col13x
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The Flicker Fusion Threshold

If I were to swagger off the streets
Some gangster as I perched the skulduggery
Of my litany in glitter and smoke
An ageless vandalism to linger unknown
While I sneer from the lounging corner of your TV

Would you recognise me

Though I slide sheathed in the flags and banners
Barking and whining with the malaise dogs of freedom
Still with the coils of bright subliminal stars
With the cool smoothing glass of my poison
Throttle every whisper in the eyes of your children

Would you know me

Should I sink in bitter teeth this Nospheratu gift
A mechanical mayhem of guts and blood
In impassioned exaltation choke the anthems of liberty
Should I scream dank from the cellar
Beneath the rubble litter of such celebrated and hollow victory

Would you hear me

When I dally in the mall smile Muzak ghost of neon
And peddle from every crisp clean rotting shelf of starvation
By coat-hanger noose dangled so footloose
Breathes it’s monoxide pull into your lungs
Better for the fashion this fashionable becomes

Do you recognise me now

As I secretive polished in slick glide reflective coercion
In the vaunted line of the halls of my fathers
Where this iniquitous trail of fiddling crumbs
Lay their poor morsel under the boot of my banquet table
I dine on metal and speak with weapons

And faceless electronic the vendetta of surveillance
And twisted media to quell every utterance
I hide this honed blade skulking behind you
Chill grip to the spine in bright sunshine
I haunt you

You ….. photographed
Are ….. stamped, filed
Mine ….. and numbered

Submitted on 2011-07-30 09:37:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I have no critiques for this. I think its awesome actualy.

I am not a fan of being numbered and monitored in the name of national security. Then also there is the soul killing materialism that a brain washed capitalist sociaty worships.

Good job on this, in my opinion. But most do not want to face or even think about this topic directly.

The realization of which forces us to look at ourselves self as well. Thats not some thing we like to do.

Desolation before introspection.

We are so docile.
| Posted on 2011-08-01 00:00:00 | by snacky fish | [ Reply to This ]

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