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    dots Submission Name: A Parody of Farcesdots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 75/186/232
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsA Parody of Farcesdots
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    Insensibly I alone never felt this regret;
    consequently as human neither can I forget
    Obscuring it all, my constituents' thunderous applause
    They pray for divine elucidation for the said encore
    despite the reoccurring failure I respite for clause
    Unable to captivate the truth in --unjust-- comedy.
    Just mindless laughing from the fiery morgue's rancor;
    An upbeat concerto --flamboyantly-- Vivaldi





    Submitted on 2011-08-01 14:37:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hmm very powerful, but yea add more to it, this is very deep. I'm still digesting the rest of it :)

    Althea~
    | Posted on 2011-08-02 00:00:00 | by AltheaLaochra | [ Reply to This ]
      I dunno, like you've said it's unfinished it still needs more. Watch out, sometimes the words chosen can overpower the poem itself... Keep on writing!
    | Posted on 2011-08-01 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      the timing of the piece makes me think of the deal just struck by the republicans and democrats...and the way the media played it up like this is some godsend...a miracle...when most of us knew all along it was a ploy---that they would reach agreement...they just want to be thought of as heroes...despite all the other conflicts and screwups the two parties have initiated..
    this probably is in a totally different direction..but that is a great thing about poetry..a certain mood, personality....happenstance can be brought to a piece...and that piece can speak of what the reader is going through or seeing at the time..

    a well implemented piece...good wording--nice rhyme/slant rhyme scheme...

    this digested well...
    even though i went off my wacky way in interpreting...
    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-08-01 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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