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    Author: Midnight_Toker
    Elite Ratio:    0.67 - 13/232/500
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotslove ?dots
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    love is powerful love is strong

    love is beautiful until love is gone


    love can go wrong

    and leave you broken inside


    love can bring indescribable warmth

    that makes you feel alive..


    love is something that thrives in your heart

    something thats precious and PURE


    not easily described in simplistic parts

    but expressed in ways so obscure


    emotional chaos we choose to endure

    procure and attempt to prolong


    that bursting torrent of hope and joy...

    becomes an empty void when love is gone.





    Submitted on 2011-08-02 00:21:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Love doesn't summon anything from thin air, it only channels what you've already got inside. You can actually channel those emotions yourself. I've always refrained from doing that though, I was afraid of becoming some sort of monster. Anyway this was a good write! Keep on writing!
    | Posted on 2011-08-02 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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