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    Author: rockhard15
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2/0/1
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    i am feeling so lonely ,
    cause you have turned your back on me ,
    love has no cure ,
    but i am pretty sure ,
    that one day u'll look back ,
    then you will realize that ,
    my love was not fake
    it was real ,
    then my broken heart will heal ,
    you are going away from me ,
    but i want you to know ,
    that when you will feel my love ,
    you should come back ,
    cause i'll me rite here waiting for you,




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