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    Author: screaminsilence
    Elite Ratio:    1.45 - 2/5/11
    Words: 194
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    i want you to see who i am
    im not a fictional character
    like "Sam i am"

    I'm the girl that drove to you
    that laughed at your corney jokes
    who cried when you walked away
    im the girl who was there for you
    every step of the way

    i can't stress enough
    the importance of love
    how illogical it may be
    it still defies us

    i stepped on my own heart
    by letting you forget who i am

    Im the girl that tried
    tried to care about you
    tried to make you see
    everything you were missing
    but you couldn't see me.

    i really would love to just walk away
    to walk away from you
    but i keep seeing your face
    and i feel so ashamed
    so ashamed that i let you break me

    this isn't even right.
    i shouldnt feel this.
    any of this.
    i take it all back
    everything i said
    did
    meant
    didn't mean
    i take back you
    i take back me
    i take it all back
    i take it all back
    obviously we weren't meant to be.




    Submitted on 2011-08-04 23:28:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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