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    dots Submission Name: Nerdy love poemdots
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    Author: snacky fish
    ASL Info:    31/male/FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 377/472/111
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 605
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    Description:
       I was punching my self in the face when I was writing this. Yelling, "Stop being such a nerd".

    Apparently my face doesn't speak fist... So here is this. Take care and die safely.


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    dotsNerdy love poemdots
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    Too stop time,
    In my mind
    One needs greater haste
    Than time itself
    Or maybe,
    The energy
    Of a quasar beam
    Colliding
    With itself

    Yet,
    Some how
    The anomaly
    Of beauty
    Becomes magnetic
    And time stops
    Attracting
    The travelers
    Of time

    Reality weakened
    Time resumes
    Fatally locked
    Like binary super novas
    Slowly,
    Consuming each other
    Interstellar
    Surrender

    Pulled past
    The event horizon
    No escape
    From the gravity
    Of beauty

    A cosmic reaction
    Unquantifiable
    Like magic




    Submitted on 2011-08-05 00:20:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Extremely nerdy love poem lol. Nice though, I'm sure you guys have great chemistry ha.

    I like how the flow runs with the content so well in this poem. It's like a spaceship burning throught space and waking the emptiness.

    Good write.

    Matt
    | Posted on 2011-08-12 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is amazingly written.
    Nerdy attributes and all.
    The imagery was fantastic and it was very deep.
    I love it.

    Keep up the good work and I'll keep reading

    H
    | Posted on 2011-08-06 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]
      Ha, I like this. I'm a bit nerdy myself, I think. Anyway, you can encompass images like this in your work without even writing them out. I know it sounds a bit crazy but rust me it is really possible. You need to view them as reflections and not images though to succeed in that. Check out some of my work to see what I mean...
    | Posted on 2011-08-05 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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