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    Author: afra
    ASL Info:    15/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.33 - 4/9/19
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    can't fulfil yours expectations ,
    i am tired of giving explanations ,

    i am living with those cried and uncried tears ,
    i have spend my whole life being blamed all there years,

    i have so many wishes so many dreams ,
    but they never came true they are just buried deep,

    i just wish the world could end tonight ,
    cause i am totally lost in the dark i wont find a light,

    they think i am just pretending ,
    i am tired of defending , (myself)

    the wounds you have left on me aren't healing ,
    the pain you have given me with a smile i am dealing ,

    why do i wish though i know it wont come true ,
    i am spending my life feeling blue ,

    some uncried tears are waiting to be cried ,
    ribbons of promises are still waiting to be tied ,

    i dont want more pain ,
    i still have those tears that yesterday have given me ,

    i never felt the happiness tears ,
    i have been disappointed all the 15 years ,





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