this is great. hand out the window great. i can feel this piece. travel with it. feel peace with an almost secret smile. and not secret as in being secretive. but the kind of secret smile that surprises people because they don't know what brought it about. it makes them curious. or at least that's been my experience.
the way it is broken up feels like how thoughts might come to mingle with observations and i like that. as well as
'erasing the multitudes of doubt /by dining on this idea/ of sunrises' -
this idea of sunrises. i really like that. in the sense that there are things in life, at least for me, that i have had an idea about. just an idea. and sometimes they are more spectacular in real life. and sometimes not. but sunrises? i don't think i have ever been disappointed. and maybe it's because i've had no expectations.