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    dots Submission Name: Somedaydots
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    Author: screaminsilence
    Elite Ratio:    1.45 - 2/5/11
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSomedaydots
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    Someday, youll see who i am
    you'll feel the pain
    and finally understand

    why do you say the things that you say?
    do you purposly hurt me?
    or try to harm me in some way?

    i'm open and honest with you
    i tell you how i feel
    the only thing i ask of you
    is for you to be real

    I'm not ready to give up on you
    im ready to try and make it through

    I love the way you laugh
    the way you touch my hand
    the way you hold me against you
    reminds me of the things i never had

    you of all people should understnad the truth
    you need me
    and
    i need you.




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