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If You Were Mine


Author: Frank Maguire
ASL Info:    57 / UK
Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 1846 /1390 /288
Words: 179
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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If You Were Mine



If you were mine
I’d give to you my being and my soul
My love for you would reach up to the sky
I’d find a way to make sure
That your life was truly whole
If you were mine,
I’d love you till I die

If you were mine
I’d shower you with raindrops full of love
My sun would brighten up your avenue
I’d give to you the brightest star
That shines so high above
If you were mine
I’d be forever true

If you were mine
I’d make you happy every single day
My heart would beat for you alone my dear
I’d never tell you any lies
No matter come what may
If you were mine
I’d always want you near

If you were mine
I’d walk with you and always hold you’re hand
My eyes would always find their way to you
I’d marry you tomorrow
And we’d wear our wedding bands
If you were mine
I’d make our dreams come true











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  Nothing but heartfelt and honest, what a beautiful write. Deep sigh. It gives a very day dreamy feeling and one of pure love and romance. As always I love reading your work.
| Posted on 2012-02-06 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]
  This is deeply intimate piece of work. It almost sounds like vows! i love the sincerity and transparency of your emotions.
| Posted on 2011-08-10 00:00:00 | by beautywithin3 | [ Reply to This ]
  This is a stunning love poem , Frank! Many a sigh will be made whilst reading this!

Your work is always outstanding, and some of the best at the site. Thanks for sharing this.
| Posted on 2011-08-09 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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