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    dots Submission Name: A Silly Poemdots
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    Author: Joachim
    ASL Info:    75 Male RSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.39 - 361/264/178
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    dotsA Silly Poemdots
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    A Silly Poem

    Said Hamlet to Ophelia,
    I'll draw a sketch of thee,
    What kind of pencil shall I use?
    2B or not 2B?


    Spike Milligan (1918 - 2002)




    Submitted on 2011-08-10 02:05:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      HAHAHA. this made me laugh out loud... at work :| LOL
    | Posted on 2011-09-05 00:00:00 | by moonlitsky | [ Reply to This ]
      ha ha ha ! i used to really like Spike Milligan. then one day, i was invited by a mutual friend, to be behind the scenes while he was working on/ recording Q. it was only then, that i discovered how sharp his brain really was. i thought he was funnier off screen than on. not only that, but he seemed to be able to play just about every instrument in the BBC orchestra ..and play well ! my outlaws have a history of mental illness and he was incredibly knowledgeable on such matters [having had several breakdowns himself] , not at all secretive about his problems, but full of practical advice. after that, i really admired him. RIP
    | Posted on 2011-08-11 00:00:00 | by Alter idem | [ Reply to This ]
      short and straight to the laugh. Very good.
    | Posted on 2011-08-10 00:00:00 | by malcolmknight | [ Reply to This ]
      Lol I like that :)

    Now I have a permanent smile for the rest of the day!

    Althea~
    | Posted on 2011-08-10 00:00:00 | by AltheaLaochra | [ Reply to This ]
      Cute!
    | Posted on 2011-08-10 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      :D
    | Posted on 2011-08-10 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]
      This made me laugh...and i think i'm going to have a smile on my face all day. Thanks for putting a smile on my face today.
    | Posted on 2011-08-10 00:00:00 | by Amma | [ Reply to This ]


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