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    dots Submission Name: just ask the icecream truckdots
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    Author: aftertheflesh
    Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 76/113/48
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       random words i fit together


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    dotsjust ask the icecream truckdots
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    kill the lights
    just sit down
    i'm still here
    look at the window
    it's just a two way mirror
    watch all the lives you helped destroy
    live to you is just a game no one can enjoy
    anger and frustration as you do another line
    helpless to the unabridged volumes in your mind
    always playing hard to get you watch and unwind




    Submitted on 2004-07-30 12:23:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i think this is a brilliant example of an intelligent mind at work... rambling on, venting, getting mental relief... although i think you meant "life" in line 7... good one though!

    - fifi
    | Posted on 2004-07-30 00:00:00 | by halopop | [ Reply to This ]
      ramdom words? i think you spent more time on this than you let on so c'mon tell the truth you spent at least five minute putting this together right?
    | Posted on 2004-07-30 00:00:00 | by Rennes | [ Reply to This ]
      you say this is just random words but when you put them together it seems to tell a druggie trumanshow type story which although a little wierd brilliant
    | Posted on 2004-07-30 00:00:00 | by stickman | [ Reply to This ]



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