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    dots Submission Name: Good Thingsdots

    Author: nicodemous
    ASL Info:    7-5-82/M/Hell
    Elite Ratio:    5.58 - 283/221/121
    Words: 18
    Class/Type: Haiku/Longing
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    dotsGood Thingsdots

    “You deserve good things”

    Although, not the best of things

    Or, I could love you

    Submitted on 2011-08-18 13:23:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      and maybe loving you wouldn't be the best of things for you...but it's an option?

    interesting haiku...

    or really senyru...but it could go a couple directions...

    i wouldn't be the best...or you don't deserve the best but you could settle for me...

    | Posted on 2011-08-19 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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