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    dots Submission Name: Secretly Telling Everyonedots

    Author: Mr.Ordinary
    ASL Info:    21/M/Navy
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 64/102/41
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 595
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       Just another one of my 5 minute writings. haven't done one in years, but i was feeling it today.

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSecretly Telling Everyonedots

    Log>Attempting to contact server...
    Log>Negotiating with server...
    Log>Logged in as: Mr.Ordinary...
    Log>Running Voice_Recorder.exe -auto_record

    Hey guess what babe
    Come on, guess
    Ummm, You miss me?
    I always miss you, guess again
    You love me?
    Play fair babe
    I dont know, You got a new car?
    I bought your birthday present today
    Ya? what you get me?
    Its a surprise, what you do today?
    I Had sex with your best friend...
    Wait, what?
    so ya ill talk to you latter

    Log>Call disconnected...
    Log>Waiting for call to establish...
    Log>Waiting for call to establish...
    Log>Waiting for call to establish...
    Log>Waiting for call to establish...
    Log>Waiting for call to establish...
    Log>Connected to reality...

    Submitted on 2011-08-19 22:58:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Haha, I'm sorry, but this makes me laugh.
    It's more of comedy to me.
    I love it when people see the real person their partner is.
    It makes them look like dumb ass bastards.

    Sorry if I seemed cold.
    Just the reason why I'm very paranoid with getting a boyfriend or girlfriend.
    So risky.

    Tsk tsk.

    So yeah, I actually enjoyed this.
    Got me a good laugh. :P

    | Posted on 2011-09-17 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      That kills.... I got pissed off reading it.. so its a good read :) love how you really made it seem like a chat great
    | Posted on 2011-08-28 00:00:00 | by unwantedlove20 | [ Reply to This ]
      very original thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2011-08-23 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      damn! nice piece. this actually happened to me 3 years ago. still a funny thing till today. glad to know that someone across the world had written something like this. keep it up man.
    | Posted on 2011-08-21 00:00:00 | by w0ords | [ Reply to This ]

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