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    Author: afra
    ASL Info:    15/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.33 - 4/9/19
    Words: 189
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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    breaking all my dreams,putting all my hopes on fire,
    watching me cry was your desire ,

    by you people only get hurt ,
    may be that was the reason of your birth ,

    i should have known that you were just fake ,
    loving you & trusting you was my biggest mistake,

    it was easy to get you out of my brain ,
    but in my heart you still remain ,

    then i moved on and my love died ,
    my heart began to heal so more i cried ,

    i broke all the love chain ,
    let all my love for you drain ,

    then you showed up again ,
    and told me you want me back ,

    when you quit playing games with my heart ,
    and tearing love apart ,

    you have already given me too much sorrow ,
    and i sure you will leave me again tomorrow,

    my tears have washed away ,
    all my love of yesterday ,

    you were just my past ,
    so in my life no more u last




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