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    dots Submission Name: Fighting With The Mirrordots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Misc/Passion
    Total Views: 494
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1063



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       Something I came up morning time, before having coffee.


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    dotsFighting With The Mirrordots
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    I stood in front of the mirror,
    Just to fight with my persona,
    The feeling was so real,
    Including sounds and aroma.
    I greeted the image,
    But it only frowned back,
    Cleaned up all the smearing,
    Because I thought it was that.
    Instead, it got worse,
    A high tone and a voice faintly,
    Course,
    Said,
    "You changed since I last seen you."
    I said,
    "I don't know you,
    What you're talking about,
    I have no clue."
    Responded,
    "You grew bitter inside."
    I wondered,
    I must be losing it and began to cry,
    I said,
    "Stop trying to make me feel guilty,
    But nice try."
    It cried back and replied,
    "I'm going to tell you something,
    in perspective, and before this,
    gets any weirder, am I the one,
    wrong for telling you the truth,
    or you for fighting with the mirror."









    Submitted on 2011-08-20 10:23:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The conclusion is the best part imo. Stylistically you still got more to learn. It would have looked much better as a rectangle of text. Like a mirror. Anyway, keep on writing!
    | Posted on 2011-08-22 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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