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    dots Submission Name: I didn't know youdots
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    Author: blackdemigod13
    Elite Ratio:    1.52 - 56/60/41
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsI didn't know youdots
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    I didn't know who you were,
    I didn't know if I like you for sure.
    I thought you would be cruel and unkind,
    But none of those things did I find.
    I found that you always face the world with an open heart,
    And hope that it won't tear you apart.




    Submitted on 2011-08-23 10:07:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A little mystery linger in this poem and i like it. I really like the very end when it states "I hope it doesn't rip you apart."
    | Posted on 2011-08-28 00:00:00 | by RinFurie | [ Reply to This ]
      I really liked this. It made me feel intrigued & hopeful @ the end.
    | Posted on 2011-08-27 00:00:00 | by mimis043 | [ Reply to This ]
      It's a bit mysterious and I'd like to know what's next :)
    But I can feel the concern and the wonder of the speaker towards the subject.
    | Posted on 2011-08-25 00:00:00 | by CrazyGinger | [ Reply to This ]
      I have a friend who often tells me that I shouldn't go about life this way. He says that I wouldn't be disappointed as often if I didn't put so much of myself into things. I prefer my way, though. It's possible that I endure more lows than others but, even one moment of the highs makes it worthwhile and one who lives more cautiously than compassionate can never know such heights.
    | Posted on 2011-08-24 00:00:00 | by MyWorld | [ Reply to This ]


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