I didn't know who you were,
I didn't know if I like you for sure.
I thought you would be cruel and unkind,
But none of those things did I find.
I found that you always face the world with an open heart,
And hope that it won't tear you apart.
| A little mystery linger in this poem and i like it. I really like the very end when it states "I hope it doesn't rip you apart."||| Posted on 2011-08-28 00:00:00 | by RinFurie | [ Reply to This ] || I really liked this. It made me feel intrigued & hopeful @ the end. ||| Posted on 2011-08-27 00:00:00 | by mimis043 | [ Reply to This ] || It's a bit mysterious and I'd like to know what's next :)|
But I can feel the concern and the wonder of the speaker towards the subject.
|| Posted on 2011-08-25 00:00:00 | by CrazyGinger | [ Reply to This ] || I have a friend who often tells me that I shouldn't go about life this way. He says that I wouldn't be disappointed as often if I didn't put so much of myself into things. I prefer my way, though. It's possible that I endure more lows than others but, even one moment of the highs makes it worthwhile and one who lives more cautiously than compassionate can never know such heights.||| Posted on 2011-08-24 00:00:00 | by MyWorld | [ Reply to This ] |